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Thread: Bleak Entry

  1. 09-19-2007, 02:56 AM #1
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    Default Bleak Entry

    Latest work [09 . 18 . 07]
    made for softw theme "Bleak"



    comments appreciated ;D
    Last edited by +mw.kira; 09-20-2007 at 08:44 AM.


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  2. 09-20-2007, 07:22 PM #2
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    Waiting for c&c XD


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    too empty
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    it's too wide



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    Hmm i would like it if ot was just the rose but i understand you have to take in the praying girl. decent job



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    Thnx for the comments ;D
    I also think it's wide lol but i don't have time to resize it XD


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  7. 09-22-2007, 05:55 AM #7
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    You have two focal points,the rose and that girl...
    And I think you could use more details...
    Other than that,it's a decent job...

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    Brahma its not bad. It needs a little bit morein the BG. ALso like DEvon said only have one focal point.

    Also I think this sig could benifit a lot by having more use with the Rule of Thirds. If you don't know what the rule of thirds is, Read this, it shows the rule of thirds really well (even though it is for photography it can apply for all art).

    http://digital-photography-school.co...ule-of-thirds/

    SO maybe just move the girl off the side and moe towards teh middle but not directy in the middle. ANyways its pretty good.


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    thnx paparok, lol


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  10. 09-23-2007, 07:03 AM #10
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    The girl looks seriously out of place...
    Either remove her, or move her to the center, cuz atm you have two focals...
    Also get rid of the thunder....
    Colours look nice and fit the signature...
    Decent tag IMO but could e improved
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