Need Help With Animation

[robgasm]

jsut made this before but its lacking something, maybe another word but i cant think what - this time i did save the .psd so i can edit it



please, only constructive comments - no rating whatsoever, that means if you think its bad say why to help me.

[-Kanji-]

animation and X is original and very cool I think. Your bg seems so out of place though. Maybe change the blue color to somethin to match ur text a wee bit more. Possibly add a render? nice work.

[robgasm]

any suggestions on the actual animation and words - thats where i thought something was missing you see...

[Bradley]

I think when "exceed" appears, it's ends up being too close to the right border. Maybe you could also try fading right to the next word instead of having the downtime with a black sig in front of you, but I wouldn't know how you do that.

[robgasm]

yeah, i knew it was a bit close but to change it and have the other text in the same position i would have to do it again ( its very hard to see wether the blur is in the same place)

[Berusadeankan]

After it sais Deepblue, add like an "ray light`" effect on the X.. know what i mean?

[robgasm]

umm... i think so, like a glow on it?

[Berusadeankan]

yeah, try it out.. Wana se the effect =)

[robgasm]

ok, maybe in an hour or two, im too lazy to do it now..

[edit] heres your glow, may not have done to the best of my ability but im pretty new to all this animation stuff

[Berusadeankan]

Increase the time and glow for it.. then its PERFECT =)