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Thread: I pwn ya! :P

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    Default I pwn ya! :P

    Try'ed to fix it a bit. (;



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    Last edited by Creative; 11-05-2007 at 03:55 PM.
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    Where to start...?

    It's too sharp.
    It's too contrasted.
    The right side is smooth, and the effects around the gun are jagged.
    I can't read the text because it's on Overlay or something weird.

    I think if you focused more on making everything fit together and adding realistic lighting you would be taking a huge step in the right direction. Just keep at it, but keep these things in mind.

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    too much light, take it down a lot actually
    what is that white stuff around the gun?
    the bg kinda sucks, i cant tell what it is
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    yea like lordemir said theres too much light and the swirls in the BG really dont do anything good for the sig.. at all..
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