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[cC.Aleksander]

My outcome from daemons newest tut. I'd like some comments and critisism on it^^

[Garis]

hm... I like the left side, but dont like the right really...
But or my comp its too dark, but I like the left side really good job on that
but the right side? I dont know why you need that lighten? it can be bg on it or something, but i think lighten dont fit here, but this was just mine opinion

[Papa]

Hmm, i kinda get what you mean Garis.
The left side of the sig (where it goes to brown) needs to be belnded better with teh ride side of the sig.
Also try to color the white light a little. It stands out a lot and draws my eye away from the render. SO i would try to color it and darken it a bit as well. Maybe a sepia tone for it?
I would lighten up the left a bit as well. It's too dark and it looks like there is a lot of cool detail in there, i would like to see more.
The text really isn't bad but it's a bit too big for my taste.

Also if it's posible see if you can add some of that stuff on teh left side to the top right. I think it'd be cool, would blend the left more, and would also make the sig look better overall.

Nice job though i like it.

[Garis]

....and also I think you can try to move the render little to the left or to the right, i THINK its not the best place to be..

[cC.Aleksander]

I really didn't want my render centered, so i just put it there^^
but thanks for the comments guys I appreciate it

[Garis]

you welcome, I wish you luck