Luminious Arc Signature

[Lunic]

I've been following a bunch of tutorials lately and I've learned a lot. It took me a while to find a font to use but even so I don't think the text I used fits exactly.. :\
I like my two outcomes though.

[Garis]

Pretty good, but text way too big for me

[cC.Aleksander]

Make the text a bit smaller, put the text layer on soft light or something and duplicate the text layer. Makes it alot better imo^^
But appart from that, i think it's a very good sig
And i like number 2 the best, because of the colors^^

[Garis]

...and I think v1 is better, becouse of the color

[Daemon]

im sorry to say but im not so crazy with this sig. The tex is to big and stands out too much. The render is very small and you haven't blended him in at all. The bg dont look all that bad but it looks like you just slammed on some c4d's and then changed the colors. This was in no mean way.

here are some stuff to work on for you.
1. blending
2. bg (more details, more interresting look)
3. (dont make your render that small better to get it a bit larger and loose some of the body.
4. Light, you can see light on the guys face but you dont have a light source in there

When that is said and done it is not to bad for one of your first
I would try some more tut's if i were you, i have some pretty goo beginner tut in signature tutorial section. Pappa have a good halo one to.

Daemon
ps Welcome to the void looking forward to knowing you.

[Lunic]

I actually just used one C4D Render. xD
Thank you for the Critiques, I'll try my best to improve on those things.

[jorrne]

The colour in V2 is better. It needs a light source though. The C4D shouldn't be so obvious. It looks like it just got slapped on. The background needs some more.. stuff. The text doesn't fit and should maybe be placed nearer to the render.