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Thread: New try

  1. #1
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    Default New try

    I like the way this turned out but still think it needs a little something just dont know what ...any pointers please??







    made a few changes ...hopefully for the better lol...
    Last edited by krypto; 02-24-2008 at 03:59 PM. Reason: revised sig

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    Its way too bright on the right side and looks like its oversharpened to me.And im finding it weird hows it green and yellow one side and white and blue the other side. And your missing some text :P might help the left side a little if you added some text that side maybe?



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    thnx firestarter...i see what ya mean about the different colors...i left the text out as i,m not really too clever with text...but will try some changes later...thanks for takin the time to reply anyway...at this point its 22 views and 1 reply...i know i dont reply much but thats because i dont think i am yet qualified to critisise peoples work, not when i'm still learning the ropes really....

    Anyway will make some changes and update with a revised version...
    Last edited by krypto; 02-24-2008 at 07:32 AM.

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    Thats great stuff man cant wait to see the revised version good luck with it



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    think i prefer the 3rd 1...lot more even ...lol

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