Adventuring

[Studhorse]

[Bloodtears]

well, I dont really like whtever is over her chest (c4d, wave effect?) and the text seems a bit weird with that big A and its color, I think you could add a gradientmap, too

[Studhorse]

Trust me, there's already a couple gradient maps in play
Yea, I kinda figured the text wasn't really working there.
Yes, C4D over her chest.

[Tooms]

Really like sig, but think the lighting if any should be worked on. The lighting for the focal appears to be coming from the front, not the back

[Bloodtears]

both.

light comes from (in her position) right-back and from the front
but the light in the forest to the right of her gives no light ^.-

thinkuvthat

[Studhorse]

well, the light to the right is BG and at a distance, so technically, the light wouldn't reach her
Thanks for the replies guys

[Garis]

Everyone said where opinios. i agree with the.. I like the text very much

[Daemon]

Well i would remove the c4d from her chest, play with some light, change the bg, cus if you look as ppl already pointed out it dont go with the light on the render. I dont know what else to say so try some things