Another shot with it.

[Papa]

I used this stock awhile ago, but i decided to have another go at it and see what other results i could get.





no clipping mask.

i couldn't decide between a white or black border.

[Kip]

I like the white border better.

But that is an amazing sig. Very good work.

[Studhorse]

Nice Papa.
Sweet looking.
Good job on the text too.
I like v2 better.

[Bloodshot]

That is an amazing sig papa I gotta say i freakin' love it

the effects are so interesting and nicely sharpened in contrast to the person

and the render effects and lighting and all that other blending jazz, everything man

the only thing that I perhaps couldve wished for

was a bit more goldish black stuff added in throughout
but thats prolly just me, I like things a bit messier and out of control abstractly like that

dude, great job

id give it a 9.3/10

[Studhorse]

Looking at it some more, I don't think you need that strip on the right hand side, it's kind of distracting me.
Could you post one with out it to compare?

[Papa]

Thanks for the input guys.
I'm most likely gonna current the one with a black border and the clipping mask, however for your sake i'll post one up without the clipping mask in a few minutes.

[Studhorse]

Ok, I see why you did it now.
Looks a little empty over there without it.
You probably could have made the canvas a little less wide.
Great job either way though

[Papa]

thanks for your critique stud. I appriciate your tenaciousness in CnCing it. It's nice having members that will critique a sig over and over to help the gfx artsit get it just right.

[Studhorse]

I try, but I usually just don't know 1/2 as much as say you and Daemon to give good and accurate pointers.
So if I helped in any way then cool

[Daemon]

Well waauw papa this looks sexy tryly one of the best i ever seen from you. The bg has depth and details all in one that is the most awesome thing. The only thing i can really point my finger at is that i dont see that clipping mask from the upper right down to the lower right corner do anything really good, just minor though. GJ