Halo3, Comment please

[CyBeN]

I just made this sig.
I like them really much, but I want to how you like it and what to correct!
So


the original one


v2
I sharpened and blured it a bit. Overblured/oversharpened maybe.

Thank you!

[roarnation]

yeah i like this sig not much bad i can say

[Daemon]

Well there are some few things you should work on the main thing must be the colors, this sigs colore are purple only wich make the sig monotone and boring to look at and thats a shame because it looks pretty decent.

[cC.Aleksander]

Yeah, work on the colors. But i like v2 ^^
Nice effects and depth IMO

[CyBeN]

Thank you very much for your advances, I have been trying around with the gradient maps.

This one is the first, but i tought it is too colorful.




v2

Better? Worse? Any advances?

[Daemon]

Yes it is very colorful, but the colors are still monotone, even if you make them brigter.when I say monotone I mean when a lot of the same colors are together. it makes the sig boring to look at.

[CyBeN]

Aha I see, how could I improve it?
I think it can be a really nice sig, its just not complete :/

[Immortal.]

like...its all the basic tone of purpley...for example..take a look at daemons timeshift sig...the yellow makes it stand out nd exciting....iunno wat u could do tho...maybe make MC's visor thingy stand out...from a green background or summin:S

[Papa]

The text is really pretty cool.
Partial Black and white might work well on this one. Some black and white with selective coloring. If you want (and you allow me to slightly edit your sig) I can show you what i mean. but i won't do so unless your okay with it.
Coloring needs a lot of work though.
The Bg and blending is pretty good, except be careful with c4d's and such. because the lines (streaks of white glare) distract a lot. I recommend clipping mask over them or covering a lot of em up in some way.
Nice blending and text though.

[CyBeN]

Thank you very much for your comments!
I would be glad if you could show me how you think it should look!
I am here to get better and I need experienced teachers

I like the blending and the bg too i just dont know how to color it correctly.

Have a nice day