Soccer sig

[Xenopz]

this is the first i've posted for feedback. was pretty much just messing around with it and came up with this. i'm pretty happy with it, but was getting frustrated with the text.



any C&C is greatly appreciated!

[nazz]

well tbh thetext is probably the best part, the text needs to be kept simple using colours that stand out nicely, or blend nicely. most sigs with the round corners turn me off, but its too red and has no depth or lighting. no real effects besides the filtering, but i dont know how you got the filter to be like, in him, like where his shadows arent, thats pretty cool. anyways, good start.

[Garis]

you really need to erase the things over the render,,,
and you need to save this in .png format.
but I like it as your first