Vivi

[ratchetnclank]

I've just made this one and i feel its missing something, any tips?

[Black Q]

Try erasing some parts on his face, as i presume u used a C4D. Text is good, bg goes wel with the C4D and the render. The render itself blends in good with the bg.

[Rentorar]

It's alright, but make sure you change the text font it's abit simple(thats in my opionin, but don't listen to me i've only just joined,lol). Overall i think its about 6/10.
Good job.

[nazz]

i say just turn down the text opacity, and maybe get rid of a fewof the effects on his face. idk but some of the big yellow dots are distracting.

[Lewk]

Its very hard, there is something missing imo too however it is hard to tell what.