Well, you placed the render totally to the right hand side, creating alot of negative space to the left, which you tried to fill with text.
Try to keep the text smaller and more unobtrusive.
Also try to place renders more to either side of the middle and fill in effects to the sides and such.
Try to keep to a solid border too and maybe one that's not so thick. Generally a thin black border a somewhat thicker cinematic border (white or black) or no border are what usually applied in sigs.
Try blending your render in with your effects some too.
Also, renders or stocks usually have some kind of lighting effect on them that should be applied in your sig.
Eventually too you'll want to try and work on depth by using light/darkness and/or sharpness/blurring.
Keep going though, the background looks nice and it's a good start.
Neliel Tu Oderschvank
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