First Tech Sig

[MonsterLishis]

Plz rate new sig 1-10 and comments would be helpful. First try with tech.

[Illegalx17]

its ok. i dont like the text animation tho. . .the bg is kinda cluttered and im not crazy for the border. not bad tho, your definetly gettin better

[rchocobo]

i agree with illegal, i dont like the animation too much, it seems um... out of place? with the border over it and all...

the border could be more complex too

[MonsterLishis]

Well I made the little text on the right when it scrolls because I thought I was going to do a border that was solid, but I didn't. I get what I get for the text, it's really choppy becasuse I tweened it in Imageready, I should have done everything by hand. Well, thanks everyone who comented.

[2-intenze]

animation sux but the rest is good

7.2/10

[MonsterLishis]

Yep I will never use Imageready tweening. Here it is with out animation.

[robgasm]

umm.. you must be really bad at tweening lol... just have 1 frame with it off the pic at teh bottom, another with it off the pic at the top and then tween it to 30-40 frames - then it wont jitter and jolt like yours

[rapidx]

Yea better without the animation.. I think that you should make the order a bit thinner in the lower left side..
keep up the good work!

[2-intenze]

2nd one without animation is better nice progress!

EDIT:

maybe is ur boarder a bit bit bit bittt too big :P