The lighting is spot on. But i think you didn't use a big enough brush for the smudge step, the canvas has alot of black and emptyness. Try making a new applied image layer and smudging that with the leaf scatter brush to fill the canvas a bit more.
The c4d's are blended well in places but not in others but quite good on the whole. On the right you can see where the c4d cut off =\
The text should be a different colour too imo. Also sharpen the render a bit.
Good second one man. if i was you i'd still mess with the right C4d. u can stilll see it. maybe you should...duplicate that c4d layer. smudge it where it overlays ironman. and then put it on screen or lower the opac so it isn't TOO much. also what you might want to do. is new layer. apply image. do a smudge of the whole thing but not over do it. then put it under all ur added on layers expect ur background, that way it'll fix what ratchet said about the c4d ending, and it'll give it a grungy looking effect. nice sig though. =)
Allmost. do a scattered smudge brush of the lines on his shoulder (our right looking at it). but on an underlayer. to give it some background. almost there though =)
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