Transformers by Lewk

[Lewk]

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[Papa]

This is a great sig, bu it seems like you want to a lot of trouble and didn't do a lot of blending. I can easily see the clearly defined edge around the render. I think you need to blend him into your effects on the sides a little bit. They already blend quite well with him i think you simply need to erase a bit of the sides of the render or something.

Your coloring is okay, however it seems a little bland. Almost green blue but mostly gray. I think it'd be pretty cool if you spice it up a bit with a bit more color. Otherwise it doesn't really stand out to me IMO.

Your effects are looking cool, and usually I'm really not a fan of the pen tool, but i think it works in this sig.

The text is pretty good, i like the placement however i would have preferred it to be a little bit smaller, and to have Lewk closer to the word transformers.

Nice job overall though.

[Lewk]

Thanks Papa, Hopefully I have the psd of it still and I will try and erase the edges i had some difficulty with that when erasing it, I'll try again though and see whats the out come


Dam my foolishness of not saving the PSD of it - slaps head -

Actually I Do have it YAY!! however i have made a new version with the same render looks rather quite better