I like the background brushing a lot. The font for the name is pretty ingeniously made. I would never have thought something like that up.
The border is sort of wide though, try one pixel black border, what you did looks like 3-4 :/.
Maybe you should blend the render some more[Send another version in]. Try duplicating the render and putting the first layer to Blending Mode: Hard Light and the duplicate to Normal and put the opacity to 50%. Maybe it will blend better then.
I like the light that seems to go down on the signature, gives it a nice depth I think and it also fits with the render.
The dimensions are kinda big though o.o.. Like really big.
It could use some work though.. first it is way to big.. when it is big it leaves a lot of open spave that you need to fill.. Try to size down the sig to oh about 300x110px. The text aint that bad.. but pixel texts make it look a lil better..
yea dude awesome job for your first sig, my first few were total crap. i also agree sig size is pretty big which can leave a lot of empty space. i like the second one better because in the first one with all the clouds n stuff, it seems to peaceful to match the render. keep up the good work dude.
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ill look into what u have said.... more crits are wellcome
