2 Smudge sigs and 1 customized sig

[Goggplex]

I tried some new stuff so here are two of my smudge sigs:

1.


2.

Here is the customized one:



Please give me some advice on improvement and some ratings. Thank you.

[aka_SFX5]

crop the height, smudging is too obvious on 2nd one and it needs a bit more solid shapes to help out the flow. first one is pretty boring, looks like you just smudged the hands. 3rd would look better if it was a bit darker and change the typo.

[Kyoushima]

The 2nd one looks like the guy in the render is disolving or something O.o
3rd looks pretty cool, although try and make it a bit darker!
and I agree with SFX5, 1st one is just a bit boring :P

[Bram]

nice render & colors in the 1st but the bg is too plain...

2nd flows good and the render also fits good but i think it could use more (2 or 3) extra colors

3d one is nice but too contrasted imho

i hope you can use this to improve 'em

[sythe]

first thing to do is use a smaller size

[Goggplex]

Thanks for the advices.

[n.D.r.]

The first one just doesn't work at all. It appears as though you're trying to capture her beauty, right? So why have her fall into the grunge that is the background? Just doesn't seem appropriate, and asthetically doesn't do the job, either.

On the second, like someone said previously, the smudging is visible, if you look for it. If it was a little more subtle, it would look really well done.

The third is nice, but a little too bright for my liking. I wish I could do that effect, though :/