too red for a start, too much scanlines, the canvas size is too big, text is too big and doesn't fit, your blending is good, but i wouldn't use so many renders in the one piece.
Originally posted by Elite Newb@Feb 5 2006, 11:38 AM it suck.
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I think we like to know why <_<
I agree with Sythe for most bits, about the canvas size being too big + too monotoned + text..lol.
The 2nd guy to the right is too overblended at his head, it's like bits of his head are missing. As for the scanlines, you can lower the opacity of it.
For the text "G-Uno" I think it's too big and I don't like how it covers part of the renders. Maybe lower the text size down and a different placement of it.
Keep trying though, and read more tutorials. You'll get the hang of it soon
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