first c4d sig

[Smiling Demon]

CnC and cause i no its bad all tips and pointers r very welcome!

[JMX]

Damn, the lense flare is way to "in ur face", and u need to work with the bg alot more, looks like u just pasted it in IMO.

*edit* Lower the opacity on the lense flare, maybe curve layer it for depth

[TONiC]

mostly lens flare. take the brightness way down, and add more contrast.

[roofus]

yeah, lens flare, needs color!

[Convenience]

^ agreed

[.blueflare]

tsd... you could of done better. add more dynamic touches to it. more effects you know the works. and yea the lense flare is a bit obvious

[Silent_Eagle]

Don't know a thing about c4d, I will try to learn some stuff but, the light is to close to the screen