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[Xobile]

i'm not really sure on this sig. this is my second attempt at a c4d sig. I DID NOT USE MY OWN C4D RENDERS. CREDIT GOES TO: http://random-hero58.deviantart.com/
I didn't want to make more renders, so i used the renders of Random-Hero58
I just did a lot of blending:

v1:


v2:

[Kyoushima]

try to make only 1 focalpoint, otherwise the sig tend to get messy