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Thread: Lyrics

  1. 06-01-2007, 02:04 PM #1
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    I Dno.. i think maybe this 1 is a lil messy anyway CnC please

    V1


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    V3


    V4


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  2. 06-01-2007, 03:39 PM #2
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    yeah i definatly think its a little messy alot goin on

    umm i would say to make the text more visable cuz i cant see it clearly and had to look around for it. other than that i think its pretty good just to clutered
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  3. 06-01-2007, 04:24 PM #3
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    id go for v5. i think this one is not one of ur best but it is still pretty good, i think is to many stripes, thats wat through me off
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  4. 06-01-2007, 08:32 PM #4
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    gangsta, v5
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  5. 06-01-2007, 10:07 PM #5
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    None of them v1 if I have to.

    Too much going on and there's not much depth. I like the left side though.. definitely not your best.


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    I completely agree with Chucks, it needs less happening and more depth. v5 is probably best though.

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  7. 06-02-2007, 12:00 PM #7
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    v5 is pretty cool. it lacks a lil in depth... and also i think the stock needs to stand out a bit more... but its pretty cool.


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  8. 06-02-2007, 12:16 PM #8
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    sayin the stock was black n white lol
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  9. 06-03-2007, 06:23 AM #9
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    lot of mess, no focal, sry dont like it
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