transformers

[BeaSt]

v1

v2



comments on wich one is bettr and the sig in general

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[BmXeR]

very busy sig

[xDMXx]

thats a hawt jawn

[BeaSt]

hmm anyone like it like this? i took render out and made it less... . . . cluttered

[Smiling Demon]

nah it needs the render... my main crit is that the colours dont match the render... they look out of place... fix that and it should be hot.

[-DS]

first- get rid of scanlines
looks messy, no focal, random flow, dont like that stained glass effect, text needs work