F - 22 Sig

[kr!ztov]

Yes, the aircraft. Why an aircraft? Because its not often you see an aircraft sig, and I like the F - 22.

[Smiling Demon]

lol i posted on emuv saying why wasnt i seing this here :P sry dude. yeh its pretty good. i just htink that there shouldnt be this like shadow around the plane.... but that it should be bright all around it.

[kr!ztov]

Well if I remove the smudging layer below the plane, then it would brighten it up. I'll give it a go and see what I come up with

Edit: This is the first edit, if that wasnt what you were talking about then just say

[Bmc]

I like the colors, and the render is nice (although the F15I is simply....more).

One thing that disturbs me is that the middle is completely covered by the plane and by light. Next time try to put it so that the render takes a big part of the sig, but the lighting on it differs so that it doesn't end up being one, concentrated source of big light, but rather show complexity.

[Einsturzende]

The render sticks out from the light/background, and I don't think that's something you'll be able to fix. I like the sig, but I just don't think the plane will work out real well -- unless you were to move it to the side or something. But that would take a lot of reorganization.

[dcn]

This one is too bright. Render is out of place as well.

[ReBeL]

/me agrees with dcn

[Smiling Demon]

i prefer the new version... it has fixed what i said. but it appears that the plane doesnt actualy fit as well as i thought it would.

[Psymon]

it has this sort of abstract feeling to it
i enjoy it