Gears Of War

[Hellion]

I havent been making any lately, so this is my first in a little while..

[MethodMan]

text is eh
hard to distinquish stock
but i like the concept and the compo
good work

[Hellion]

thanks, i need to get a better text

[Smiling Demon]

positioning of text needs work, otherwise i think its alright. nicely done.

[Chucks]

hard to distinquish stock

I agree. I don't like the left side, doesn't seem to fit in with the stock and the right side. Nice try though

[Hellion]

thanks, i was trying to get some light rays in there

[Chucks]

Try using the dodge + burn tool? I wouldn't really recommend using a c4d render as a light source of light rays. They usually screw the work up instead of making it better.

[Hellion]

ok, cant work on it now, i gotata do homework for a while