IMO, my best yet

[Ooj]

Comments etc please -

[Lewk]

The Belnding is good however IMO the c4d is the focal point and not the render,
turn down the opacity on it, also the text could do with a little work =]

[cC.Aleksander]

Agree.
Text needs work, and your lightsource is way to attracting. Turn it down a bit, either by blending mode, or opacity.
But very nice job

[zole]

nice sig man i like the lighting effect Good Work! (Y)

[Walsh]

looks really good IMO , really like it

[Garis]

nice work and effects
looks really good.
still. I didnt get the point wtf is on the render.
c4d need some replacment

[Immortal.]

really nice..always have tried to use that render..
wasn't successful..
u were...u did a nice job..
just touch it up a bit as mentioned above..
and it'll be class