A Long Verse about Bad Rappers

[elixile]

Had time so I wrote a long cypher. Don't see a rule here that prohibits swearing because most raps do have cuss words. I also don't see a prohibition of explicit lyrics so yeah. As you see I have some multi-rhymes to create a better flow with the lyrics. Multi-rhymes are lines which do not rhyme only with the last word of each line.

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What's the deal, with all the whack rap nowadays?
The more they're paid, their lyrical talent will fade.
Their pay gets raised, every time they hit platinum.
Chardonnay everyday, got cases with stacks in em.
My shit is bad? Got a million cash in the balcony.
That's their mentality, if they get a high record salary.
While the poor underground rappers seem to have the best albums.
Only 10 percent of us all, acknowledge and buy them.
A small percentage of the realest lyricists become famous.
Other fake rappers can stick their cumshot dicks up their anus.
50 cent can start a beef with me, but I'll smash him back.
Shove the grilled teeth up his ass with the help of my fans.
Even If I never have fans, I will never stop rapping.
That was the plan, to be the last man still standing.
And it's happening, cos half of rap is already dead.
European cars in their garage, all they want is the bread.
Lined up bottles of gin, booze and stereo systems.
It's full of flaws, Misuse rap like they misuse religion.
It's a contagious syndrome, increasing it's victims through time.
It's like AIDS cos' it's a sickness that don't reveal it's symptoms.
It weakens the rhyme, and decays it's real meaning.
Leaving with fake ass rappers on the media scene and
The public never realizes, and it blindly concedes.
It's like a fucking lever thriving all the likely indecent.
The people harness the lies, and never think of the reasons.
The media puncture their minds, and find nothing inside.
so they believe they can populate, and eradicate reality.
Aggravate the illest rappers, all their hate and insanity.
Will it have any effect on the press? and will the rest
of the lesser masses who pay their respects for the best
lyricists to ever spit from their chests and invest
their lives on writing rhymes, will they ever ingest,
rebel and excite, until the explosives ignite?
Will they fight? change the motives if it's wrong or right?
Was right all along, Fight. Be strong for every song I write.

[Rai]

I don't like rap, because it all sounds commercial in my ears. As for these lines of text... sorry. It's not even music, it's just an urban version of poetry, which I find very distasteful. I see some nasty lines inbetween your text, not my taste son.

[elixile]

Didn't write it for you son. Nah j/k.

I respect your taste. But yeah, I don't like categorizing music. Rap is this. Metal is that. Drone is this. If some people find it pleasuring to listen to, they listen to it. Music doesn't have to be classified and all that. That's just my two cents.

[Apathy]

I know how you feel, that's just how Hip-Hop is nowadays. It's been commercialized and lost its meaning, that's how it's protrayed. Too many fake rappers giving it a bad name. It's so easy to make an album now and make money, every half assed rapper is tryin to get his piece. That's why I only listen to underground Hip-Hop, cause I feel like it hasn't lost total meaning yet.

But I also understand that rap is ever evolving and this is just what it's like in these times, kinda sad though.

[elixile]

Haha absolutely true. Only listen to underground and most old school.

[Crazymike]

=/ It;s okay, not the best, not saying I could do better but from my point of view I would agree with elixe.