Rate And Slate - Halo Sig

[Lewk]

I know halo is over done.. but this render looked quite cool, the angle of it and all looked nice soo..

[Papa]

It seems a bit dark. the coloring is nice as well as the blending..and ytou did well on the text..however right below the lewk text it seems kind of empty. you might wanna fix that and add a bit mroe of a BG there..Overall though it's okay.

[Immortal.]

nice attempt..the text is well done as said...fillling up that empty part will be sorta hard i noe how it feels...try a c4d or something? but yeah..nice blending...