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Thread: 2 new sigs

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    Default 2 new sigs





    whatya guys think?

    i know my blurr on the 2nd 1 is too much
    but i got lazy

    advice and critsm pls ty!

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    1st: The first one seems really..unnessecarily red. XD The car just seems red and the BG is also red it's a bit monotone and really kind of bothers me quite a bit. The blending is okay, car sigs are always hard to blend. However the car is too far over to the left.
    Like I said in reinkaos' thread read up on the rule of thirds. It can be in the middle it can be on the side, just dont make it on the edge of the border like that. It doesn't give the viewer enough breathing room between the render and the border.
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    The text is pretty good. I like it and nice use of defaults.
    2nd - ..bright! this thing is like glow in the dark XD. I would try to bring it a bit darker. I have a hard time seeeing much of the BG.
    Also the lighting seems to be a bit off..well actually your half right. The lighting coming fromt he top left is correct. However the shadow on the side of his face tells me the lighting from behind his head..doesn't work. You're gonna wanna get rid of that.

    Not to bad though overall. The first is better IMO.


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    i'll try to make some darker sigs next time
    and thx

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