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[eagles16]

[Immortal.]

reminds me of fire's style lol
nice effects, i just can't see the render wel.
but ur text is nice IMO
keep it up.

[Studhorse]

Not bad, but it looks flat, there's no depth to it.

[Garis]

agree with friends above ;]
try to use some c4ds for some details in the sides

[eagles16]

alrite thanks guys

[Papa]

I knwo you smudged it but the white make sit really hard to see him. Maybe if it was an off-white, or a gray or something it'd work better.
The effect c4d's look nice and do well for the sig.
The Bg looks pretty nice as well the smudging background gives you something to look at but isn't distracting. We just need some depth. There doesn't seem to be any depth so add some by bluring side and sharpening the render.

SOlid sig otherwise.

[eagles16]

alright thanks, i kinda followed your aeon flux tag tut for a lil but it didnt work out so i just did my thing