Dead space

[ratchetnclank]

After being rusty as hell for the last few weeks, i moved away from stocks and back to renders.


Heres my result. I'm really pleased with it myself.

[Firescorpio]

wow ratchet pink name <.> xD where ive been lol xD either way it looks grat bro nice depth lacks a bit of compo but i cna live with it great effects lightning overall a great quality as always i just feel text is off in this one either way lits a cool sig bro
edit: i get what u were goign with the negative space one the left side for the text but it kidn of throws me off a bit

[Jeff]

text should look much more serious, like small spaced out times new roman, mabye all caps. otherwise it looks nice.

try blurring the right side.

[Garis]

El Fuego said a lot.
but why right side is.. just dont fit IMO.
I think/. make it liek left side. and add some cool C4Ds. ;]
other that that. awesome; ;]

[Studhorse]

It looks pretty decent, unfortunately I don't know what the render is.
Text could use work too.

[ratchetnclank]

text should look much more serious, like small spaced out times new roman, mabye all caps. otherwise it looks nice.

try blurring the right side.

Fix that soon and post up

[Immortal.]

i think it all flows, like the bg on the right vastly diff than the left, i like that alot. lol i guess i do that sometimes as well that's why. my only concern is the text, it should be a bit more serious like jeff sed. that's it. nice work man.

[ratchetnclank]

V2:

[Jeff]

i was thinking more like

d e a d
..... s p a c e


spacing helps.

the blur, I dunno. looks good either way really.

[ratchetnclank]

i was thinking more like

d e a d
..... s p a c e


spacing helps.

the blur, I dunno. looks good either way really.

Better?