new1 (yay!)

[machiavelli1]

My latest1 didn't got many comments that meant it was good.... right? That kinda inspired me to make another1 here it is ^^

[Garis]

Really nice one.
its kinda b/w but I like it.
just need to erase stuff over his head.
nice work/.

[Papa]

Lighting is pretty great, just tone it down a bit it's a tad too bright. the effects are nice and go well, i would just erase the effects over his face.

I want to see more color in this either go with all black and white or try to add more color. Right now color wise it's kind of plain.

[machiavelli1]

alright i got cha

[Immortal.]

yeah ur text could use a bit of work IMO
and maybe add in a bit more colour,
otherwise looking well on it's way.