Dragon Ball Z. Goku. SOTW

[Garis]

hehe. elllooo.
whats up?
hope you doing well


am.
I give to you my latėst. it also goes for SOTW.
So any tips would be very appriciated

[ratchetnclank]

It is looking very messy and hard ti see properly i think this could be fixed with some topazing. The two light sources is throwing off the lighting. Text is good apart from goku which just doesn't fit at all. Needs a bit more work imo garis i like the link to the sotw theme though.

[Immortal.]

yeah sorta messy.
u could make the focal a bit more clearer.

[Studhorse]

agreed.
everything about the focal sems kinda bright, no depth.

[Immortal.]

btw i love the effects at the sides tho.
forgot to mention.

[China-DoLL]

I like it as it is, DRAGON FIST!

[Garis]

Okey guys. I hope I will fix it soon.

[Garis]

It is looking very messy and hard ti see properly i think this could be fixed with some topazing. The two light sources is throwing off the lighting. Text is good apart from goku which just doesn't fit at all. Needs a bit more work imo garis i like the link to the sotw theme though.

and where do you see two light sources?

[Garis]

UPDATED.
removed white stuff around the hand.
render is more clearly now.
GOKU is removed also.

[xJTRx]

I like the blending! Maybe clean the brushes around the text? But it looks solid. Awesome sig.