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    Default Space (Under Construction)

    I'm not complete yet, i started out with an itnitail idea of a speceship blasting off from space, but its not quite working,posting this to see that u guys think i can do to complete it.







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    The lack of texture on the planet really lets this down.


    Rest is good though.


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    I would have to say the 1st thing is the realism.
    You have a great cloud stock, but the ship and planet look cartoony(for lack of a better word) next to it. I'd look for a better ship render maybe.

    Planet could use a little more work too as far as texture goes and those circle brushes you have around it I don't are helping any.

    Kepp at it though, good concept.
    I like the text too



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    Quote Originally Posted by Studhorse View Post
    I would have to say the 1st thing is the realism.
    You have a great cloud stock, but the ship and planet look cartoony(for lack of a better word) next to it. I'd look for a better ship render maybe.
    aswelll as the direction of the lighting. its different on the planet, ship and clouds.


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    That stunning man Gj on it ^^

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    Stud and nazz covered the bulk of it.
    The blending of the spaceship seems really sloppy. The sky seems to overlap over the ship: get in with a pen tool, pen tool it out and make it look clean.

    I do think however if the clouds looked less realistic they would all look just about the same cartoonyness. The ship and planet seems about close enough. Just the clouds are too real. Not bad though man. keep up with the cool works.


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