War would end...

[Papa]

V1. - orignal

v2 -

V3 -

Some simple typography and a bit of pen tooling.
Just playing around. I found this random quote from stanley baldwin. Decided to mess around with it.

[Aces High]

I really, really like this papa. IMO, the color choices are perfect, and i like what you chose to do the quote in the shape of a nade. the only suggestion i have is trim off the extra space on each side since there's nothing out there, there's no need for it. make the focus the typography work and then turn this sucker into a poster. i'd buy it! nice work dude!

[B]

try and make the words shape the grenade it just right now its kinda looks like a square 8P

[Papa]

thanks for the crits guys
I originally made it square to make it kind of like a flash bang but the head didn't look right so i conformed with the rest of the art world and decided to just do a normal old grenade XD.

I got crits other places to add a texture to the BG and to also liek you guys said to shape it mroe. So i have three versions i think V2 is the best purely because the word END is soo huge.

But I want to hear what you guys have to say.

[zole]

V3 is the best IMO just move the "The" under the "END" to the left abit that would be awesome man GJ (Y)

[Daemon]

I normally doesnt like typo so much, but the version 3 is awesome here dude nice work man. I like version 3 most because it looks the old fashion nade the most

[Papa]

Thanks for the crits guys I'm pretty happy with the way this one turned out. i still have to figure out which one i like best..

[Immortal.]

v3 ftw.
nice work.
u got it all covered big paps.

[be_fresh]

looks real good, one thing that catches me eye though is the last three lines. they seem to be slowly moving over to the right, if you centered "if the" and took some spacing out in between the words and centered the next to lines to that, it would look tight.

[HackKite24]

Looks nice man god work on it ^^