First Ever Space LP

[zole]

Hey here it is

http://zoleooo.deviantart.com/art/Fi...cture-97869558

C&C hope its ok for a first try lmao

Cheers
Dan.

[Aces High]

Nice dude, I like it. Especially the attention paid to light source. I mean, I know it's supposed to be space, but still. Some people don't pay attention to light source at all, and it can look inconsistent. Awesome job! Make it bigger next time, though !

[Papa]

This is pretty nice. You made the planets too right? Good job on the texture it looks nice and goes well. I'm not a fan of the blurring on the edge of the planets and the stars though. One thing you'll notice about most space art if you rbowse dev art, is that it has like no depth of feild lol. It's all over sharpened.

Depth of feild doesn't work in space derrrr.

None-the-less nice job. I like this a lot. Now enter it into my comp!

[zole]

hahaha ok Papa and if you want to know what i did to this i brushed everything and made the planets myself lmao so i think its ok and it is big but cos it was so big it didnt fit on my screen so it had 2 be reduced to go on DA lol :S

[zole]

Bump lmao

[BonesMa]

Nice work on the debular looking forward to seeing more space art from you. DA watched btw

[ratchetnclank]

Looks damn good. You sure it's your first?


get rid of the blur though it ruins it.

[Mclazzlo]

i say get rid of blur, and there are some rings under the left planet which look as though they are lost and dont belong
it looks awsome though i love it