My Outcome of Okami Tutorial

[zole]

Hey here is my outcome lol hope you like



Cheers (Y)

[Metal1]

negatives - dont like text, quite empty, more c4d?
positives - nice render, like the colours.

[Lew]

yeh that emptyness in the right side is killing it.
Sharpen it more.

[Immortal.]

way too empty on right i say.

[zole]

was going for that effect cos if you read the text it says Success is "LONELY" lol :S so i hope that changes your mind about this sig lol

[CharlieTango]

I got that when I saw it. I like the void. But the word "success", does it have to be tucked behind his shoulder?

[Aces High]

I might be crazy, but I feel like if you pushed the text into the void area it would make it look even more empty by accented the space around. I'm probably nuts, but who knows? Nice colors and blending. Awesome job zole