My first, criticize me :D

[tinyman316]

I know it's crappy, i could really use some advice.
I'm pretty noob at this, but I'd like to get better.
So whadda ya say?
Any advice for me, guys?



Also, heres my first sig
it still feels pretty noob to me
anything at all would help me out




evan [[EPIC]]

[Papa]

Well first off this isn't a sig, I'm pretty sure you already know it but just to be sure..

I think to make it look more legit you should use as many c4d's. Use stocks of landscapes or something. Having just plain c4d's a bit sloppy.

Also i'm not really sure what the deal is with the red c4d behind her. Is it supposed to be a wing? If it is u you could try just pen tooling out a wing next time or use a stock one.

Overall i think you just are limiting yourself to c4d's way too much and you should try to expand yourself to other stocks.

[Studhorse]

Nice concept, but I think Papa has the right idea for it.

[tinyman316]

yeah, it's an LP right?
sigs are what you guys have under your replies
i'm not gonna make a sig until I'm pretty decent at this
thank you for the feed back
so you're saying I should try to use more stock landscapes?
As apposed to using so many c4d's?



evan [[EPIC]]

[zole]

Yeah that is exactly what he is saying + i agree with him but i like its concept alot if you got a real angel wing of a render of stock and then all random landscapes in the squares it would be an awesome LP but maybe make it bigger :S?

[tinyman316]

wouldn't the quality get worse if I stretched it?
but I totally agree, it would look much better if it was bigger

and I'll go look for real wings and more landscapes right now!
should I get rid of every c4d? or just keep a few?

[Skatanic_]

Personally i don't like the C4Ds But what ever looks good to you

[SonicX360]

Yo if your going for the angel wing idea well then you need these.

Link
http://spiritsighs-stock.deviantart....e+-in%3Ascraps

Its a brush set

[xJTRx]

Some othe stuff looks really kool, just gotta check out the blending a bit more. The wing idea is a really kool concept, nice try on that 1. Good stuff overall Evan.

Also this is 1 of my real life friends , thx for going easy on him.

[tinyman316]

Yo if your going for the angel wing idea well then you need these.

Link
http://spiritsighs-stock.deviantart....e+-in%3Ascraps

Its a brush set

it didn't load as brushes for me
it loaded up as images on my pc
did I do something wrong? (obviously haha)