Frist Sig

[neocarter]

can you not but really harsh here i dont mind if you tell me where i am going wrong but dont be like all abusive (i am only lilttle).

also if you could tell me where i have gone wrong so i want fall over the same wire twice

[Lew]

Ok so lets see.
Lighting looks good, same with the color scheme.
Text its kk, maybe place it closer to the focal point(in this case the squirrel)
In my opinion the focal point should be placed in the middle.
Now, those c4d effects don't fit so good.
Intead of lower the opacity try set them to Screen in the Blending options.
Overall it's a good sig for a begginner.
Good job.

[neocarter]

thank you for like not being harsh and saying it was shit and stuff and thank you for the comments and how to fix it

[Lew]

thank you for like not being harsh and saying it was shit and stuff and thank you for the comments and how to fix it

Glad to help.
Also good work.

[zole]

IMO for a first its one of the best ive seen compaired to some peoples first its Leet haha i agree with Lew maybe change it to linear dodge :S the erase parts that dont fit and then go to Filter > Add Gradient Map and you can set that to Soft light and lower its opacity to blend it and give it abit more colour + mabye change colour of text and then position of render it would look awesome man but otherwise good job welcome to GFXVoid

[Papa]

Not bad for your first sig at all. I like the BG it kind of goes with the render.
Blending wise i think youdid a pretty good job, just be careful that you don't cover the render too much. I'm impressed one how well you obeyed the rule of thirds, compositionally.

Effects are okay, but i agree you need to change that c4d to linear dodge to make it glow more, or set it to normal, either one.

text isn't bad, i'm glad oyu are using default text but the white blends in a bit too much, in this sig i migth have gone for a nice orangish color.

For a first this one is amazing. I've never seen first sigs this good. Nice stuff