Photo Retouching

[Federation]

Yes i used a tutorial.

[Garis]

I dont see big different. maybe just darker face or something.

[Lewk]

Yeah same. and some hilights to the cheeks

[Papa]

TBH i don't see a lot of work here. Yes you got her skin tones pretty nicley in the top one. But really theres a ton more work that should be done here.
Here eyes could be sharpened and dodged/burned to bring them out more. She has too many stray hairs too, you should try to minimize that, and the Umbrella should be darkened a bit.

Also, am i the only person to notice that there is a ring of redness around her hairline/head? needs some cleaning up.

[Lewk]

Yeah, I see a red patch in the Hair line..

[Federation]

TBH i don't see a lot of work here. Yes you got her skin tones pretty nicley in the top one. But really theres a ton more work that should be done here.
Here eyes could be sharpened and dodged/burned to bring them out more. She has too many stray hairs too, you should try to minimize that, and the Umbrella should be darkened a bit.

Also, am i the only person to notice that there is a ring of redness around her hairline/head? needs some cleaning up.

thats where you wrong.
i worked on everything but the umbrella and the hair. i got lazy.

[Papa]

thats where you wrong.
i worked on everything but the umbrella and the hair. i got lazy.

I disagree. The only noticeable work is in the skin tones. It doesn't matter what you did where if it makes slim to no impact on the photo itself.

[ratchetnclank]

She has grey hairs in her eyebrows which need sorting. Her smile is ugly i would take one from another photo and clone it on. The big indent on her right(our left) jaw would need to be softened. Her eyes could do eith sharpen as papa said. Her hair looks dry and straw like i would add more tones to counter this.

Tbh there is loads more you can do.

[Aces High]

Dang ratchet! I think the smile's fine. I agree with the rest of what's been said. Work on it some more and keep us updated!

[Federation]

I disagree. The only noticeable work is in the skin tones. It doesn't matter what you did where if it makes slim to no impact on the photo itself.

sorry. you know nothing about retouching then.