Death Note >;D

[machiavelli1]

What yall think about it?

[crazycata]

it needs more depth, and a beter focal...

[Garis]

firstly I like the sizing
and stuff as crazycata said.
but I love the text very much.

[Fur]

Way to bright tone it down a little and make the render stand out a little more, but it looks good just need to change a few things

[Papa]

firstly I like the sizing
and stuff as crazycata said.
but I love the text very much.

I really disagree with you. Yes the sizing is okay, and i agree it could use some more depth and a better focal.

But the text..It is not working. Please stick to default fonts until you compltly master the art of text. This font is not pulling it off. It draws away from the focal way too much and the style doesn't match the sigs.

Also try to lower the birghtness of the sig but getting rid of some of the effects in the white. And also bring out the focal at the same time.

[machiavelli1]

I really disagree with you. Yes the sizing is okay, and i agree it could use some more depth and a better focal.

But the text..It is not working. Please stick to default fonts until you compltly master the art of text. This font is not pulling it off. It draws away from the focal way too much and the style doesn't match the sigs.

Also try to lower the birghtness of the sig but getting rid of some of the effects in the white. And also bring out the focal at the same time.

weeeell i thought using death note font in death note signature only made sense, but i guess i have no say here so, yea thnx for feedback man. ill mess with this1 a little more just a bit later, you see, im lazy :/