Audi 80 B2

[Garis]

heh. My first car tuning LP
I know. there are a lot of mistakes. ://
Better tuning next time

Stock: http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedi...0_b2_v_sst.jpg

[Dale]

...BMW Rims?

If i were you i'd work on the bonnet, maybe open a new document, create a horizontally striped image ( rather large ) and then add perspective so that it matches that of the car. And then shape it to fit the bonnet This may work better then the diagonal lines, which show the angle rather strangely!

I think this could do with a bit of neatening up on the stocks, and maybe looking at the lighting and angle / perspective of certain parts ( eg bumper ) a little more.

But it's a wicked image Love the colours chosen too!

And. The text... is good!"

[Sinus]

looks not bad,but you could work more on it :/
First rims are under the car.Personally I don't like that.
Love the hood.Reminds me NFS Also car colour is nice.
keep working man

[Studhorse]

dude, that's freakin sweet.
Love to see a tut on that whenever you think it's finished.

[Garis]

Thanks guys. ;]
I promise, you will see better one next time. ;]

anybody else to comment?

[MarkPancake]

Great job Garis, perhaps neaten the stocks up a bit. The bodykit at the front is just a little too noticable and you can see it's been added on. A few more lighting effects to really give it a good finish and show it in a way that makes us feel it's really there, and it'll be great.

[Aces High]

Wow, I'm impressed. Honestly, this is a new one for me, and it's is a really impressive technique. Really nice work garis!

[Ptka]

Whoah, that is sick. There are a few things that look a bit off, but that just looks amazing. :P

[Lewk]

What etxt was used for the garis, garis :P