First Sig in Long Time

[asal]

I just made this Sig for my gears 2 clan and just wondering what you think. Its just a clan sig so im not workin too hard on it but i like it still, and i dont like my text but can never get it better

[tunafish69]

The motion blur is too strong for that kind of sig. Try smudging with a 17px chalk brush, with high scatter settings on his back. Would add a nice effect. Also try blurring the BG a little more and try to darken your focal, just a tiny bit.

[XaiXo]

Gears 2 clan eh? You on GameBattles?

I think the background lets this down, it's very bland and there's no effects there or anything, it seems empty.

[xJTRx]

it seems like it has forced depth, but it's good overall just keep working at it man