1st wall

[cc.mio]

my first wallpaper, I worked hard on that

[tunafish69]

Very nice

[Lewk]

a differnet render would make this pic own.

[Ptka]

The background is very cool, that is some nice brushing.

[Sinus]

Agree with Ptka,backround owns.
Render is okay,but maybe different one would fit more.
Keep it up man.

[Suddu]

Yeah the bg looks good..Like the hair color

[cc.mio]

ok i try it with different render
better?

[Aces High]

v2 rocks. awesome adjustment. nice work

[Ptka]

Yeah Aces got it dead on: The second render is sick! I love what you did with that one. :P The brushing, wrapped around the arm is very cool.

[Dale]

I would brighten up some parts of the bg. And maybe do a continuation of his tshirt colour through one of the sets of lines. Just so it flooooooooooows.

Very nice though

I also don't like his desaturated hand!