Gears

[K00L4ID]

Well I figged I could try a sig for it, but it didn't turn out like I would have wanted. I kno the render is like Immortal's =/ but I couldnt find a better one for gears 2, so I had to do what I had to do lol. Well I'd like to make it better, since I was gonna see if I could enter it into a competition on another forum, but I'm not sure if there's much I could do lol. The coloring is just wrong to me...

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Any ideas? Or just normal CnC is good too


EDIT: Added a less saturized verz. Not sure if its better or not, eyes havent gotten used to them yet lol

[BonesMa]

Looks good I like the less saturation vers but deleat the gun part of that layer to make the coouring better.

[K00L4ID]

Changed around some stuffage, I think it might look a lil better since its not so bright

[xJTRx]

Loose the text, it would look way better.

[Papa]

i agree with JTR the text isn't working with it right now. Loose the text and it's look awesome. I liek the smudging and the depth overall pretty good job.