attempt at abstract

[soniclnd]

okay, so i finally found a cool 3d render and wanted to do a cool sig with it... i'm not very good at brushing, but i gave it a try... here's what i came up with




any constructive criticism will be appreciated... marks of 10 will be cool too (don't be afraid to be honest..)

[Twan]

I like it a lot, but I think that the scan lines take away from the render. Maybe lighten them a little or only put them in a few sections around the sig. It's very nice otherwise.

8/10

[soniclnd]

there... how's that.... i put the scanlines on the top left part of the sig and left the render alone........

[Twan]

Originally posted by soniclnd@Jan 30 2005, 05:14 PM
there... how's that.... i put the scanlines on the top left part of the sig and left the render alone........

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8.5/10

[soniclnd]

it does look better that way

[tacoX]

It looks great, but I think you should make some of the effects stand out a bit more. It seems to me like theres a lot of potential, but its just to damn hard to see!

The text color you used is pretty horrible though. The text also looks blurry. 6/10. It looking a lot better, but theres alwyas room for improvement =).

[soniclnd]

made some minor adjustments to the render

[Dale]

7.5/10 , but it does all seem a bit murky and hard to see. Nice ideas and render though! ^.^

[graffic]

Pretty good, but I suggest making the render stand out a little more

[streetsoulja]

it's hot, mayne