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    Default Newest, robot, transformer, MEch thing XD

    i had a few minutets to spare so i kinda rushed it. i like how it turned for a quicky, but i wanna know what you guys think about it and what i can improve on [my way of saying CnC ]. thanks

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    Not liking the text, it just looks to chaotic it's hard to tell what's what and theres no real focal point.

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    It's a Gundam. I like this, alot.

    Sharpen up the render, or something. It needs to stick out more.
    These machines feed off the tears, of broken lives and dying dreams. - Rise against.

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    Sharpen the render WAY more, blur the BG and possibly take out a few of the effects, don't make the text a clipping mask, it makes it impossible to read. It's nice you just need to let us focus on the focal.
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    Don't ever 'rush it' it's a problem that i'm coping with... impatience.. take time with your art mann

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