Two new... I like one! :o

[Miril]

First one (the one I like):



Second one (meh, not so much):



C&C Please

[Papa]

The first one: it's a bit busy but it's not bad. I like the coloring and the blending is fantastic. BUt why the green inside the text? it doesn't make sense at all. Switch the green to blue and it'd be 100 times better.

i agree with you on the second There's not flow,a nd the text is killing it. It just doesn't rly wow me.

[tunafish69]

The green text on the first one doesn't really do anything. As Papa said, a blue would be nice. Maybe try smudging his left shoulder to add to the flow.

[Miril]

I smudged his left shoulder a little, not so much that its a visible smudge but so it helps with blending/flow and changed the text color, I couldn't really find a good blue from the sig but this is what I got:



thanks for the C&C keep it coming please

[tunafish69]

Very nice, maybe a more visible light source, try a 200px soft 20% opacity on a very light pink, then over that the same brush but with white. That would add more definition.

[Ptka]

I would also try sharpening the right side of those purple lines, because the left side is and they look a bit blurry. Great job, and I agree, your second one^^ up there, didn't have much flow, a bit too random.

[Miril]

ahah Ptka, you read my mind! I was thinking that the every time i looked at it and then now read your comment :3 also added in a little more visible lighting though not too much, didn't want to make it too bright

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edit(woops wrong copy)

thankies :3

[Immortal.]

the first one...the v3 looks quite nice.
i really like the text you did and it overall looks quite nice.
well done.