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[Jool]

Feel free to criticize as usual. ^-^

I personally think I should have used a clipping mask.

[Immortal.]

yes i think u should add a clippin mask for a bit more flow at the bottom..its just abrubtly cut off.

the bg works well nice work
u should add some lighting from behind him cuz the lights on his face shows that.
text is ok...
need some effects.

keep at it man
just try these things and u'll be well.

[tunafish69]

Your background is a little blank, try adding a few effect C4d's and some splatters (but not too much) maybe a clipping mask or two. A little lighting and some depth and you'll have a nice little tag there. :P

[BonesMa]

A bit empty but works well your best I have seen from you yet.

[Papa]

I agree with immortal. Add lighting and add clipping masks.
ALso it looks liek you smudged the BG a few things to remember when you are smudging:
STart with a big brush about 50 px, then after getting a few basics done, DUplicate your original render (or whatever you are smudging) and use about a 5-7 px brush. Use scattering and use 100% hardness. This will give the BG more variation in the smudging and will be much more interesting than a flat smudge.

[Helix]

It needs more flow my friend.. you could use the paintbrush and paint some simple green lines and distort them or something for a very basic form of flow.. .