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gave another shot at 1 of these.
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Nice, i would use a soft eraser on the edge of the dinosaur, low opacity. This will help remove the very fine line surrounding it.
Also, i like the broken glass, nice and subtle 
Maybe some highlights on the cracks just to make them stand out a little?
All in all. Nicely done, and a little different to everything else =)
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I love this except for the text. It doesn't fit imo.
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 Originally Posted by Dale
Nice, i would use a soft eraser on the edge of the dinosaur, low opacity. This will help remove the very fine line surrounding it.
Also, i like the broken glass, nice and subtle
Maybe some highlights on the cracks just to make them stand out a little?
All in all. Nicely done, and a little different to everything else =)
yea, the lines around the dino were worse, but i got rid of some of it. I'll try your suggestion. Thanks.
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Originally Posted by ratchetnclank
I love this except for the text. It doesn't fit imo.
Maybe i'll try something different.
is it the font?location?
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Originally Posted by Studhorse
Maybe i'll try something different.
is it the font?location?
Maybe a little too realistic is wrong font and out of place.
Rage ware needs to be kerned closer together imo and use a more dull red for rage.
Gaming systems is perfect though.
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I like it a lot.. but I feel like there should be more emphasis on the computer.. if possible.. it is after-all what you're advertising... not dinosaurs
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Originally Posted by Helix
I like it a lot.. but I feel like there should be more emphasis on the computer.. if possible.. it is after-all what you're advertising... not dinosaurs
Agreed. I thinkt he plants in the BG give thatr feeling off. Make it a more sleek looking BG to go witht he computer.
THis is okay but nothing to unique. Make the galss stand out more witht he shatters. A little highpass aorund the edges might help.
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I don't really like the colours but the effect is quite cool.
Make the text a duller red, so that it doesn't stand out TOO much.
Love the computer, and the BG looks pretty nice too.
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