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    Scholarship Poster for my college. The origional's obviously bigger than this one"

    Last edited by Tavro; 12-13-2008 at 12:43 PM.

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    Haha, thats really nice. You vectored that well, and everything seems to fit together nicely. Something weird about that framed thing though, it looks a bit flat which kind of throws that part off a bit.

    Nice job!
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    University of Southern Indiana?


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    That's the one. Not universally known for it's graphic art's dept., but it's actually quite nice.

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    I really like the composition at the top of the piece, however towards the bottom it's really lacking ( in my opinion )

    The idea is really good, just colours and shapes don't seem to match too well.

    Also think about things like the paintbrush standing out more then your actual title, and the mix of two styles ( The techy title and vastly different bg )

    I think a little more contrast wouldn't hurt master chief either


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    haha thats sweet

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    Quote Originally Posted by Dale View Post
    I really like the composition at the top of the piece, however towards the bottom it's really lacking ( in my opinion )

    The idea is really good, just colours and shapes don't seem to match too well.

    Also think about things like the paintbrush standing out more then your actual title, and the mix of two styles ( The techy title and vastly different bg )

    I think a little more contrast wouldn't hurt master chief either
    Thanks for the crit! Now I just gotta find what I did with the origional .psd file :/

    Quick Edit: Also I gotta work on the text in the frame a wee bit.

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    Dude, Virtue and I are at Indiana University. I agree with dale for the most part. More contrast on the chief and perhaps a little more depth especially in the leg area. Well done





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    Word? I have a ton of friends up there. I would've liked to have gone there myself, but I need to sleep every once in a while :P

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    Straight up! Hahahaha, and that is completely understandable. Are you majoring in graphic design or some sort?





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